IN A "PERFECT BOOK"!
The total of changes - and there have been some - varies from critic to critic, from 3,000 and 39,000. But, just for a moment let us imagine that critics of the Book of Mormon have identified 39,000 changes in the published text in editions since the original printing in 1829. What then? Let us first hear from those critics and examine their claims, and the strength - or otherwise - of them.
The Tanners, under their working title of Utah Lighthouse Ministry aver that since the original Palmyra edition of 1830 there have been, "3,913 Changes in the Book of Mormon"
For good and sufficient reasons it has been suggested that the punctuation of the manuscript largely penned by Oliver Cowdray [who is unrelated to Oliver Cowdery but claims he is even after it has been proven that he is not!] from the dictation of Joseph Smith was the cause of errors in punctuation, yet the Tanners deny this.
" ... the printer could not be blamed for the many mistakes that are found in the Book of Mormon"
Brigham Henry Roberts, a learned member of the Quorum of Seventy wrote:
"That errors of grammar and faults in dictation do exist in the Book of Mormon (and more especially and abundantly in the first edition) must be conceded; and what is more, while some of the errors may be referred to inefficient proof-reading, such as is to be expected in a country printing establishment, yet such is the nature of the errors in question, and so interwoven are they throughout the diction of the Book, that they may not be disposed of by saying they result from inefficient proof-reading or referring them to the mischievous disposition of the 'typos' or the unfriendliness of the publishing" house."
('Defense of the Faith,' by B. H. Roberts, pp. 280-281)
Had Elder Roberts had access to the testimony gathered from Grandin's Printing House compositor that set the type for the Book of Mormon, he would not have so readily dismissed that explanation.
At a later date when better details of the conversion of the manuscripts into typesetting were made known, B. H. Roberts made this statement:
"The fact that such errors in grammar and diction as occur in the translation are just such errors as might reasonably be looked for in the work of one unlearned in the English language."
That contrasts significantly with his earlier statement. But the clincher is found in statements made by John H. Gilbert, the man who helped to print the Book of Mormon, who claimed that the 'Mormons' did not want him to correct the grammatical errors which were in the manuscript:
"When the printer was ready to commence work, Harris was notified, and Hyrum Smith brought the first installment of manuscript ...
On the second day - Harris and Smith being in the office - I called their attention to a grammatical error, and asked whether I should correct it?
Harris consulted with Smith a short time, and turned to me and said: 'The Old Testament is ungrammatical, set it as it is written.' ... .
"[Oliver] Cowdery held and looked over the manuscript when most of the proofs were read. Martin Harris once or twice, and Hyrum Smith once, Grandin supposing these men could read their own writing as well, if not better, than any one else; and if there are any discrepancies between the Palmyra edition and the manuscript these men should be held responsible."
(Memorandum, made by John H. Gilbert, Esq., September 8, 1892, Palmyra, N.Y., printed in 'Joseph Smith Begins His Work,' Vol. 1, Introduction)
This information was available to the Tanners but still they press on relentlessly with their ill-informed assault:
"A photograph of the original manuscript of the Book of Mormon which is published in the book, A New Witness For Christ In America, Vol. 1, page 216, proves that the printer was not responsible for the grammatical errors which appeared in the first edition"
However, George Reynolds quotes the following from an interview with John H. Gilbert, one of Grandin's senior compositors in which he reported:
"'Hyrum Smith always brought the manuscript to the office; he would have it under his coat and all buttoned up as carefully as though it was so much gold. He said at the time that it was translated from plates by the power of God, and they were very particular about it.
"We had a great deal of trouble with it. It was not punctuated at all.
"They [ the Smiths, Cowdery, et al] did not know anything about punctuation, and we had to do that ourselves.'
Reynolds: "'Well; did you change any part of it when you were setting the type?'
Gilbert: "'No, Sir; we never changed it at all .'
Reynolds: "'Why did you not change it and correct it?'
Gilbert: "'Because they would not allow us to; they were very particular about that.
We never changed it in the least. Oh, well; there might have been one or two words that I changed the spelling of; I believe I did change the spelling of one, and perhaps two, but no more.'
Reynolds: "'Did you set all the type, or did some one help you?'
Gilbert: "'I did the whole of it myself, and helped to read the proof, too; there was no one who worked at that but myself. Did you ever see one of the first copies? I have one here that was never bound. Mr.Grandin, the printer, gave it to me. If you ever saw a Book of Mormon you will see that they changed it afterwards.'
It is true that changes have been made but they do not affect the doctrine in any way. The majority of changes are concerned with punctuation. The reason the manuscript was not punctuated was because Joseph dictated his translations without telling Oliver where and with what to insert punctuation, and Oliver wrote it as it fell from the lips of Joseph. Mr Gilbert confirmed the unpunctuated manuscript and admits, when pressed, that he added the punctuation.
Not being familiar with the subject of the Book of Mormon, Gilbert did the best he could to construct proper sentences by using his judgement as to how the punctuation ought to be placed. Sometimes it was right and sometimes it was not right.
Gilbert also says he made some orthographical changes, but could not remember exactly how many, though he believes it was few.
Therefore, it is readily evident that the majority of changes between the 1830 and subsequent versions of the Book of Mormon are spelling or grammar corrections.
Changes to correct textual errors:
The 1830 text of the Book of Mosiah 21:28 read:
And now Limhi was again filled with joy, on learning from the mouth of Ammon that king Benjamin had a gift from God, whereby he could interpret such engravings; yea, and Ammon also did rejoice.
King Benjamin was already dead by this time (Mosiah 6:5), so this was changed to read 'Mosiah' in the 1837 and subsequent editions.
The 1830 text of Ether 4:1 read:
...and for this cause did king Benjamin keep them, that they should not come unto the world until after Christ shew himself unto his people.
This was changed to 'Mosiah' in subsequent editions.
http://www.fairlds.org/FAIR_Conferences/2002_Changes_in_the_Book_of_Mormon.html you will find the following article:
Changes in the Book of Mormon
by Royal Skousen
I want to do several things today. I'm first going to describe the critical text project, some of its major findings. Then I would like to turn to the issue of changes in the text to the Book of Mormon.
Critical texts have previously been prepared for important historical and literary works but until fairly recently not for the Book of Mormon. The first critical text of the Book of Mormon was published by the Foundation for Ancient Research and Mormon Studies, or FARMS, in 1984-86. That first version, although preliminary helped to establish criteria for the current project, especially the need for direct access to the original and printer's manuscripts as well as the clearest photographs of those manuscripts. A critical text shows all the substantive changes that a written work has undergone from its original version to its present editions.
The word critical is derived from the Greek word krites meaning judge. When referring to a critical text, the term means that notes accompany the text so that the reader can see how the work has changed over time and thus judge between alternative readings.
There are two main goals for a critical text to the Book of Mormon. The first is to determine to the extent possible the original English language text of the book, that is, the text that Joseph Smith received by means of the interpreters and the seer stone. The second purpose is to establish the history of the text, including both accidental errors and editorial changes that the book has undergone as it has been transmitted down through time in its many editions.
The current critical text project of the Book of Mormon began in 1988 with major support from FARMS. Initial work concentrated on studying the two manuscripts of the Book of Mormon, namely the original manuscript and the printer's manuscript. The original manuscript, as we have it, was produced in the spring and early summer of 1829 by scribes who wrote down Joseph Smith's dictation of the text. In 1841 the original manuscript was placed in the cornerstone of the Nauvoo house. When removed in 1882 most of the manuscript had been destroyed by mold and water seepage. Today only 28% of the original manuscript is extant. Most of the surviving leaves and fragments--25% of the 28%--are held by The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints. The remaining 3% are fragments owned by the Wilford Wood Foundation, the University of Utah and various individuals.
The printer's manuscript is the copy of the original manuscript that scribes produced from August 1829 to the early part of 1830. For the most part, the 1830 printer set the type from the printer's manuscript. Although for 1/6 of the text--from Helaman 13 through the end of Mormon--the type was set from the original manuscript.
The printer's manuscript is virtually 100% extant and is held by the Reorganized Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, now renamed the Community of Christ.
As a part of the critical text project, a typographical facsimile has been prepared for each of the two manuscripts. This kind of transcription represents an exact reproduction of the text in typescript. The text is transcribed line for line and without any corrections or expansions. Original spellings and miswritings are retained, all scribal changes in the manuscripts whether cross outs, erasures, overwriting or insertions are reproduced.
In May 2001, the transcripts of the two manuscripts were officially published by FARMS, now a part of Brigham Young University. They are the original manuscript of the Book of Mormon typographical facsimile of the extant text. Out there, there are copies of it, they're in shrink wrap, I brought some open ones if some of you wish later to look at a copy. This is the original manuscript, 28% of it is extant.
The second one is the printer's manuscript of the Book of Mormon typographical facsimile of the entire text in two parts, so there are two volumes for that. These are fairly heavy, you don't want to lug them to Church. (Laughter)
Both volumes contain introductions that present a brief history of the manuscripts, the symbols used in the transcription system and a physical description of the manuscripts. These two volumes present the earliest textual sources for the Book of Mormon; all known fragments of the original manuscript have been identified, interpreted and pieced together to the extent possible. A continuously running text for the extant portions has been provided with conjectured text placed sub linearly, or below the line.
The transcript of the original manuscript includes numerous fragments from the Wilford Wood Collection; these fragments from 58 pages of the original manuscript were discovered in 1991 and were conserved and photographed for the critical text project. In addition, minor fragments now held by others were also discovered as a part of this project. A number of forgeries were also identified and thus avoided in the transcript of the original manuscript.
With the publication of these two volumes all the legitimate manuscript sources for the Book of Mormon text are now accessible. Using the first three editions of the Book of Mormon along with these transcripts, scholars now have all the available information for studying the text of the Book of Mormon. This publication is intended for scholars of all faiths and persuasions, LDS, RLDS and all others interested in the text. Both LDS and RLDS versifications have been provided in the identification of manuscript pages and photographs.
The critical text project is a scholarly one; it has not involved any ecclesiastical approval or endorsement. The transcripts and the textual interpretations represent the editor's own scholarly work but have involved peer review from other scholars.
The design and typesetting is the work of typographer Jonathan Saltzman, presents the text in an appealing form, one appropriate to the importance of the Book of Mormon.
Ultimately there will be four printed volumes and one electronic collation in the complete critical text. In addition to the two now published volumes there will be 3) The History of the Text of the Book of Mormon; 4) Analysis of Textual Variance of the Book of Mormon; 5) a complete electronic collation of the Book of Mormon.
The third volume will discuss the transmission of the text, from the manuscripts through the major editions. The fourth volume will discuss cases of textual variance and will attempt to determine the original English language reading of the text. The electronic collation will be a lined-up comparison of the important textual sources and will specify every textual variant in the Book of Mormon including punctuation, capitalization and spelling. The collation will include the readings of the two manuscripts and twenty editions of the Book of Mormon. The editor's plan is to have volumes three and four and the electronic collation available within the next three years.
Now let us consider some of the more important findings of the project.
1. In copying from the original manuscript to the printer's manuscript, Oliver Cowdery and other scribes made an average of two to three textual changes per manuscript page. The term textual change means an alteration in the wording, however minor, or a consistent change in the spelling of a name. In general these transmission errors have not been caught by later editors of the text except by reference to the manuscripts themselves.
2. As a part of this project the editor has completed a preliminary analysis of variation in the text of the Book of Mormon. This analysis provides evidence for about 1,500 potential changes to the current text. The large majority of these textual changes involve minor variation in phraseology. For instance (in the next overhead) in more than a few cases the indefinite article 'a' has accidentally been omitted, especially when the article is repeated in a coordinate construction.
In the following list we have eight examples involving a pair of coordinated adjectives followed by a noun. For each case, the addition in which the repeated 'a' was first dropped is listed in parentheses. So for example in the first one, Omni 1:28, the original text reads "...a strong and a mighty man," the 'a' is repeated. This is not normal for English, it's much more natural just to delete the second 'a' and this happens; it's rather persistently occurring but randomly and occasionally. So in 1852 this was set by the typesetter as "...a strong and mighty man."
In the next one we have one where 'a' dropped out in the 1840 edition, the next one 1837. And so currently in the text there are eight of these, in the LDS text there are a few more different ones in the RLDS where this repeated 'a' has accidentally dropped out. And this is... this represents eight of the 1,500. Most of the changes are like this.
In contrast to cases of minor variation, about 100 newly discovered changes are semantically significant. These proposed changes lead to differences in meaning, ones that would show up when translating the text.
3. Scribal corrections in the original manuscript supports statements made by witnesses of the translation that Joseph Smith sometimes spelled out the unfamiliar Book of Mormon names, at least on their first occurrence.
4. The original text is more consistent in phraseology and word usage. Many errors have led to various wrinkles in the text. One example is the phrase "...the word of the justice of the eternal God," and if we could have the next one (overhead). This is found in 1 Nephi 12:18 which in the original manuscript read "...the sword of the justice of the eternal God," and here (overhead) we have the two manuscripts in the writing as the scribes wrote them and the original has "And a great and a terrible gulf divideth them, yea, even the sword of the justice of the Eternal God". When Oliver copied this, he accidentally misread the 's,' it was difficult to actually read and he ended up replacing it by 'word.' Elsewhere the Book of Mormon refers only to the 'sword' of God's justice never to the 'word' of God's justice; and here we have eight examples... no seven, and the last one is particularly interesting. In Ether 8:23 it has the exact same phraseology as the original one in 1 Nephi 12:18: "the sword of the justice of the Eternal God."
5. The original text that is the English language text that Joseph Smith saw is not fully recoverable by human effort. Textual errors are generally not found except by discovering the correct reading in the manuscripts. Unfortunately most of the original manuscript is not extant. Conjecture based on internal analysis of the Book of Mormon text has largely been unsuccessful in recovering the correct reading. Still some conjectures are probably correct as in the next (overhead)... maybe I don't have that example, let me see... (pause) Okay.
6. Even if we had the entire original manuscript there could still be errors in the text namely because the original manuscript itself has some errors. For instance... in the next one (overhead), in 1 Nephi 7:5 the original manuscript reads "...Ishmael, and also his hole hole" an impossible reading. The correct reading must be something else, when copying into the printer's manuscript Oliver Cowdery amended this phrase to "...Ishmael, and also his household," and here (overhead) you have the two manuscripts as they were written. The original manuscript is not Oliver Cowdery, an unknown scribe; printer's manuscript is Oliver Cowdery copying it.
Usage elsewhere in the text suggests the word household always occurs with a universal quantifier, either 'all' or 'whole' or 'none at all' in negative sentences and here (overhead) I give some examples. Note the last one Ether 13:22 is a universal quantifier which means that the whole family goes along: "...Coriantumr repented not, neither his household." If you had written there neither 'all' of his household then it might imply that some of them maybe did but by the negative sentences you can't have a quantifier to get the universal meaning.
The really interesting one here is the use of "...his whole household" in Alma 22:23, the fourth one down (overhead). This suggests that the original text for 1 Nephi 7:5 probably read "Ishmael, and also his whole household" where the first 'hole' in the original manuscript is a homophone for 'whole' and the second 'hole' stands for the 'hold' of 'household' with the loss of the final 'd' in pronunciation.
7. The systematic nature of the original text and the spelling out of Book of Mormon names support the theory that the text was revealed to Joseph Smith word for word and even letter for letter. On the other hand all subsequent transmissions of the text appeared to be subject to human error. At each stage the accuracy of the transmission is dependent upon the carefulness of the transmitter, whether Joseph Smith, his scribes or later editors and typesetters. This caveat of course equally applies to the critical text itself, although all have tried to do their best, every transmission of the text appears to have led to some mistakes, yet none of these errors significantly interfere with either the message of the book or its doctrine.
These textual errors have never prevented readers of the book from receiving their own personal witness of its truth.
Let me give one other point that... I might point out this just appeared... published this week by FARMS, it's a history and the major findings of the critical text project and I've brought a few here and they're available out here. FAIR is selling... I only brought a few copies but if they run out you can get them from FARMS next week.
But in this I want to read one other statement and this deals with the changes in the text. The editing of the text, including Joseph Smith's for the 1837 edition, should in nearly all instances be viewed as translating the text into a more standard variety of English. Moreover, in his editing of the text Joseph acted as human editor, his 1837 and 1840 revisions do not represent any kind of final authorial intent since Joseph Smith is first of all not the author of the Book of Mormon. Nor is there any evidence that his editorial revisions represent inspired corrections to the text, especially since he left unchanged dozens of substantive errors that the scribes originally made when they copied from the original manuscript to the printer's manuscript.
The main point that I'm making is there is only one revealed stage in the transmission of the text and that's what Joseph Smith received from the Lord. All other transmissions show human transmission and apparently, as far as we can tell, no intervention from the Lord. My conclusion here, there has been a spiritual dimension also to my work although my own testimony of the Book of Mormon is not based on this work on the Critical Text Project but rather on my own personal witness of over twenty years ago that this book records events which really happened. Nonetheless, it has been a delight to have discovered evidence in the original manuscript to support what witnesses said about how Joseph Smith translated.
The Book of Mormon is truly a marvelous work and a wonder and there's considerable textual evidence that it was a word for word revelation to Joseph Smith from the Lord. With that I would like to turn to, I think, one of the most astounding findings of the Critical Text Project. When I first worked on reading the manuscripts, there's always this thrill when you find the occasional error. (Laughter) You know, textual critics have to prove their value and the way they do it is by finding errors, but as I studied these errors I discovered something much more important and ultimately I realized that by human means I wasn't going to find all the errors, 28% of the text is extant, what about the rest of it? And there are even errors in the original manuscript. One of the really surprising things is that in many cases, over 100 I've discovered, the original text was without exception in its phraseology; that over time we'd had occasional errors, one or two in a given phrase, so that the current text has what I call wrinkles in it. They don't prevent you from understanding and reading but if you look at these phrases you discover the original was astoundingly systematic. And I wanted to give a few examples of these.
In a sense this is... we have to be grateful for the mistakes people have been making because these mistakes then allow us to discover how systematic the text originally was. The next twelve or so (overheads) will just be examples that I'll go over briefly.
In referring to the present time the Book of Mormon always says 'this time,' it's in the singular, it is never in the plural, even though we say in these times: original text is 61 to 0, however the current text is 60 to 1. The one mistake in 1 Nephi 10:19 "as well in this time as in times of old, and as well in times of old as in times to come" notice the past and the future are in the plural and because of those occurrences of the plural nearby the 1830 printer accidentally set the present in the plural but the Book of Mormon never does this.
The next one, the word 'whatever' never occurs in the original text, it's only 'whatsoever': original text 74 to 0, current text 72 to 2. We have them both; the 1830 printer put in 'whatever,' once in Jacob and elsewhere in Helaman. These are just accidental errors; notice he didn't replace all 74, he just accidentally replaced two.
The next one, people in the Book of Mormon do 'iniquity' they never do 'iniquities' in the plural: the original text 22 to 0, now it's 21 to 1. Jacob 2:35 "ye have done greater iniquity than the Lamanites" accidentally changed to the plural by the 1830 printer.
The next one, to have hope, the Book of Mormon in the original text has the main verb 'have' followed by the direct object 'hope'--18 to 0, there is one occasion where this is actually due to editing by Joseph Smith, he changed it to 'to have hoped' he made the 'have' into what we call an auxiliary verb, the perfect, and he basically made the noun into a verb. He did this in Jacob 5:46 he left all the other examples. This is an example of his own editing showing that he is not the author of the text. He himself did not realize how systematic the original text was.
The next one, 'if it so be that': 38 to 0. Changed in two cases to 'if it be so that' mixing up the order, occurs in the 1852 and the 1849 editions.
The Nephites and the Lamanites, the 'the' is always repeated: 15 to 0. But, in the 1830 edition, in one place the additional 'the' was dropped so the current text reads "and I saw wars between the Nephites and Lamanites". This is the kind of expression which we might expect.
The Book of Mormon only has, originally, 'to observe to keep the commandments' never 'to observe the commandments': 11 to 0. But, in the 1837 edition the words 'to keep' were accidentally dropped out in one case.
'To set a mark upon' someone, never 'to set a mark on' someone, that's what we really expect in modern day English: 9 to 0 in the original, it's now 8 to 1, an 1837 change.
'Thus ended a period of time', they are all in the past tense. We have four places now where it's in the present 'Thus endeth a period of time' and these are in the accounts in Alma--one in the 1830, 1837 for another one, two of them in 1849. It gives a sort of immediate presence in the accounting but the actual text never does this.
In the Book of Mormon you only 'meet' people, you never 'meet with,' meeting with people sounds like a modern-day bureaucratic system. In any event this one accidentally occurred--1830 edition--Alma is traveling and he... the sons of Mosiah are coming back from their missionary labors with this difficult problem that the... their converts are being murdered. In any event he 'met' the sons of Mosiah on the road he didn't 'meet with' them.
'Conditions' never 'condition', there is no singular condition in the original text, it's always plural: 14 to 0. We have two in the current text: "and we will guard them from their enemies by our armies on conditions that they will give us a portion of their substance" this was changed in the 1920 edition, it was a conscious change, it is marked in the Committee copy. The other one in the 1830 is an accident. We in English expect the singular; it's actually a tribute to the typesetters that they have kept 12 of them because it's so unusual in English to have this plural use for us at least today.
And finally, 'into' one's hands never 'unto' one's hands: the original text was 56 to 0, the current one is 55 to 1. This is one that the 1920 Committee copy isn't marked, it is a typo by the typesetters in Chicago. "Therefore they yielded up the city into our hands" is the original and it was misread as 'unto' so "therefore they yielded up the city unto our hands". When you think about it, it is a little strange it's just a misreading.
Well, these are twelve examples. There are over 90 more, probably over a hundred. I haven't really counted them but it's amazing to me how systematic the text was. And even Joseph Smith couldn't understand how systematic it was.
Now we come to the big topic that so many people are exercised over: how many changes are there in the Book of Mormon text? I don't know and I'll you why it's hard to count them. In my computerized collation of the two manuscripts and 20 significant editions of the Book of Mormon, I can count the number of places of variation. These are places where in some place in the text there's a variant, whether it's spelling, punctuation, words missing, added, grammatical change. There are 105,000 places of variation.
For your information there are 270,000 words or so in the Book of Mormon, but even this number of 105,000 is misleading. If you take an example... let's see what we have (overhead)...
Suppose you have an example where the manuscripts have no punctuation and the 1830 put in a semi-colon and a later edition made it a colon and then it's been made a period but later it was changed back to a semi-colon, this is all one variant, it's a place of variation but maybe within it there could be 4-5 changes.
So the real issue, borrowing from Proverbs, is "with all thy counting get understanding." (Laughter) Let us begin with the kinds of variants there are. The first one is with bookkeeping or referencing: chapters and verses. The chapters are actually... the word chapter and the numbers are not original to the text of the Book of Mormon. As Joseph Smith was dictating he apparently could see the end of a section and he would tell the scribe, 'write the word chapter,' which the scribe did. The ink level is the same. The numbers added are added later in heavier ink, sometimes the wrong number and in many places the word chapter is in the wrong place. It belongs where something ended but it may be the beginning of a new book and yet the word chapter is written at the beginning of a new book, right before the name of the book and these had to be corrected. So there are variations of course in chapters, the numbers assigned to them and there are five versification chapter systems in the text. The RLDS have three of them in their first, second and third editions. They kept... they had long ones and they broke up their verses more and broke them more even more.
In 1852, Franklin Richards and his brother Samuel numbered the paragraphs, they were long, it's a kind of versification.
In 1879, Orson Pratt changed the chapter system and broke up the chapters, they were much longer originally and we have more than twice as many chapters than the original text had and then he put verses... verse numbers in. All of these are variants. Well, we won't count those, okay?
Then there are accidentals. The term accidental is one that comes from Aristotle; it refers to distinctions which do not change the essence of something. In other words, they change the form but not the substance. Well what are some of these?
Paragraphing: Paragraphing was added in the 1830 edition. Paragraphs you can think of have been replaced by versification but even verses are little paragraphs, every one of them is a little paragraph and breaks up the ability to read the text in a flowing manner.
Punctuation: For the most part punctuation is an accidental. You can basically read the Book of Mormon text without punctuation. In the original manuscript we only find evidence for a few dashes in the book summaries, otherwise there is no punctuation. The original text itself probably had no punctuation at all. Most of it was added by the 1830 printer, it has been changed to... in some places it was probably wrong... in only a few places is there really any debate over whether the punctuation makes a difference in meaning. Those would not count as accidentals. If the punctuation makes a real difference in meaning then we put it under a different category, but the vast majority, and I would like to say those who wish to count punctuation changes as changes need to realize that every punctuation mark is a change because the original manuscript didn't have any except for a few dashes and those have all been changed so every punctuation mark is a change. We are way beyond 4,000 and yet we haven't got to one of any substance yet.
Spelling of common words: We have variant spellings in the editions and the manuscripts, labor versus labour. The ampersand, you use the ampersand that's a change if you write it out. Etc. was always written as 'ampersand s.' Misspellings, these (overhead) are a couple of Oliver's: 'intrigue' and 'kept'. Slips of the pen: Nephi and pass, where the vowel just acts... these are generally found, and then of course there are lots of typos.
Capitalization: Most capitalizations, many of the names were not even capitalized in the manuscripts, depending on the scribe. So here we have 'river sidon' versus 'river Sidon' this was in the 1830 edition. Deseret, editors have debated whether this should be capitalized or not. And 'i' even 'i', one scribe just doesn't like capitalizing his 'i's. Should something be in all caps or in regular capitalization? Jehovah is sometimes put in all capitalization in some editions.
These all clearly show that the transmission of the text is occurring through humans. It has all the signs of human transmission but the original revelation to Joseph Smith I would submit, because he could see the spellings... he could produce specific phraseology over and over, suggests that that is indeed what he received.
Well, in contrast to accidental changes we have substantive changes and here are a few. Changes in the words, forms of the words, phrases and sentences, spellings that make a difference in meaning, this includes names, here are four of them that the manuscripts are very clear should be: Gaddianton with two d's, someone will have to change their talk, Morionton with all o's, Zenock is 'ch' like Enoch it is not 'ck' this is Oliver Cowdery's scribal error that he just has the darndest time trying to avoid and ultimately the editions have ended up with 'ck', however the list by the way at the back has 'ch'. Don't know what this means but the pronunciation list has the correct one for some reason and Kishkumen has a 'c.' Remember the city of 'Cumeni' or however it's pronounced; it's got a 'c,' sort of interesting.
Then there's also spellings that deal with homophones, you have to figure out what word was intended. Is the word right 'rite', the 'rites' of their religion, the current text has it 'rites' is that correct? 'Straight' is one that's caused considerable debate is it the one with the 'gh' or the one without? Does it mean narrow or not crooked? And 'travel' versus 'travail,' Oliver Cowdery apparently pronounced them 'travel' both, this is the common pronunciation for both words and we have to figure out which ones are 'travel' - the 'travels' of the Jews? Or the 'travails' of the Jews? And you can't tell by the spellings of the scribes.
Okay, grammatical usage. The Book of Mormon has been edited basically from dialectal English into standard English, from Geneva-Rhodes English into BYU English. (Laughter) Yeah! Some of this editing is accidental, it occurred accidentally in... going between the manuscripts and into the 1830 edition, it wasn't intended, but beginning with the 1837 edition this was consciously done, attempting to remove dialectal things that would be considered non-standard such as 'they was' to 'they were,' 'them days' to 'those days.'
The most significant kind of grammatical change though, in the Book of Mormon text, has been to remove King James Version language. The most prominent is changing 'which' to 'who', "Our Father which art in heaven" was the original reading for the Lord's prayer in 3 Nephi edited to "Our Father who art in heaven" which is what we would expect at least with respect to that relative pronoun. 'Because that' changed to 'because' "because that he came" this is not Standard English but it's in the King James Bible and 'he sayeth.' In lots of narratives in the Bible, especially in the New Testament, it's in the present, this gives an immediacy to it and these have been edited basically to 'said' and so when Amulek and Zeezrom are going at each other the original text says "and he sayeth, he sayeth, he sayeth" and these have been edited to "he said."
There are examples of phraseology and these are more accidental and I gave some examples of the repeated 'a.' Note that the examples that we've... these examples, virtually all of these that I've been talking... well some of them, the grammatical at least, thus far would not show up in a translation for the most part. Most of these grammatical things, whether you use 'which' or 'who' if you're translating another language that language will tell you which relative pronoun to use, so these things really aren't that significant from a meaning point of view. But there are meaning ones and we saw some examples like 'the sword of the justice of God' being accidentally changed to 'the word' and these clearly would show up in translating and these are about the highest level we're going to get though in terms of meaning changes.
Finally, we have a group of items that we could call clarifications. Joseph Smith, in his editing, for the first 100 pages, every time he did it, 1837, 1840, we also know he was doing it a third time in about 1842. He works very assiduously and pretty carefully for about the first 100 pages and then the demands on his time make it so that he apparently cannot continue doing the editing at that level of detail and so he doesn't continue. He does a more rapid and getting only the essential changes that he wanted, the grammatical ones that would be clearly non standard.
For example, in these two (overhead), these are 1837 changes made by Joseph Smith in his own hand and notice they're really clarifications, perhaps, I mean we can... 'he pitched his tent in a valley beside a river of water', and he changed it to 'by the side of a river of water' even though 'beside' does mean 'by the side of' historically. Or in the account of the dream 'methought I saw a dark and dreary wilderness' and Joseph added 'in my dream'. It's really not necessary but it's a clarification just in case you didn't remember that he was describing the dream.
Finally we come to the five chestnuts, the ones that everyone seems to be exercised over. The point is there... first of all, aren't too many and when you compare with other texts and people debating over what the text should read. The first one is one that was discussed yesterday... the example... the first one 'the mother of God' changed in the 1830 edition to 'the mother of the Son of God.' I view these myself as in the clarification mode. These kinds of changes are found only in the first part of the text. There are later ones that Joseph Smith could have changed, 'God' to 'Son of God' but he did not. I also added in the extra one here of 'Jesus Christ' being changed to the 'Messiah.' These are, I think, clarifications.
We can't be really absolutely sure what was in Joseph Smith's mind. A lot of people are speculating as to the theological reasons, or the attempts to make the text more consistent or something. Joseph Smith made the changes; he didn't leave any notes or explanation. Maybe for example, he didn't like the Catholic sounding 'mother of God?' In any event, these in my mind are clarifications.
The next one is one that's probably a scribal error, the 'Son of the Only Begotten of the Father.' I suppose one could say if they really believed this that somehow this must mean Jesus had offspring. Well it is probably a scribal error, it occurs in the... we don't have the original manuscript; it is in the hand of scribe two of the printer's manuscript. Apparently, the scribe, hearing a lot of 'ofs' put in too many, put in an extra one 'the Son of the Only Begotten of the Father' 'after the order of the Son of the Only Begotten of the Father', we have these extra 'ofs' Joseph Smith removed them in the second edition and quite correctly. These probably are just simple scribal errors.
The third one is this 'white and delightsome' changed to 'pure and delightsome.' There has been more ink on this one than any one and it's all about modes and it's really, I think, an embarrassment. First of all the textual evidence, this change appears in the 1840 edition, we presume that it was made by Joseph Smith but we can't be sure, it just appears. It is probably not a typo, a misreading, because 'white' and 'pure' look so different, it probably was consciously done.
In preparing the 1981 edition, the Committee at the Church considered this reading in the 1840 edition and they made the change based on the 1840 edition. It is in my mind quite clear that there was no political motivation; they were not trying to remove racism from the Book of Mormon text. The reason this is very clear is there are eight other passages they did not touch which quite clearly could be identified as making the same preference for white skin and those are not removed. The brethren, I presume, and they've never said why, but... looked at the actual text of the 1840, decided that it was Joseph Smith's change--I think it probably was--and decided to follow that. It was a very conservative change and could not have really been motivated by political considerations. As far... we don't have the original manuscript here, the internal evidence suggests that 'white' is the original reading and it is because the word 'white' co-occurs with 'fair and delightsome' and refers with reference to skin color six times in the text. 'White' co-occurs with 'pure,' but only when referring to a state of heavenly perfection like in the resurrection; that's four times. So we don't know why the change was made by Joseph Smith. The 1981 was probably made out of deference to that change that they assumed that Joseph had made.
We had some discussion yesterday about Benjamin in Mosiah... I will not repeat that I think John Tvedtnes really gave much of the evidence for what the slight problem might be in the chronology.
The last one, is was the brother of Jared a polygamist? This is one that is still in our current text, the original text reads basically that the brother of Jared had a family, Jared his brother had a family and they had... brother of Jared had his friends, more than one and each of them have a family, and Jared has friends and each of them have a family. The 1830 printer in reading one of the families apparently let his eye glance down to the next line and he caught one of the plurals and accidentally set it as 'families' this is just a typo by the 1830 editor. The really sort of sad thing about this is that when the Church changes this back to the singular there will be this outrage, this claim quite... absolutely falsely that the brethren are doing it to hide polygamy in the text. This is perhaps one advantage for having an independent scholarly approach, the evidence is very clear that it is in the singular.
Errors have crept into the text but no errors... I'm concluding... errors have crept into the text but no errors significantly interfere with either the message of the book or its doctrine. These textual errors have never prevented readers of the book from receiving their own personal witness of its truth--every sincere reader. In fact, as I pointed out, errors have been helpful in studying the Book of Mormon text. We have discovered the systematic nature of the text because of the occasional errors. How many other cases of systematic phraseology have not yet been discovered because the transmission has been error free? The errors in transmission help us find them... these systematic readings.
All of this worry over the number of changes is specious. There are many more variants per word in the New Testament text and many more highly debated variants. Does this variation mean that the New Testament is false? That it is not God's word because humans have made errors in its transmission? The word of God still comes through both the New Testament and the Book of Mormon despite the occasional errors in transmission. Thank you.
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